Amy M. Spagnola

CONTENT CREATOR*DIGITAL STORYTELLER*FASHION FANATIC

Before and After Online Dating Profile Rewrite

Polish that Profile!
Before/After Dating Dating Profile Rewrite:

Before:
CoolColoradoChick
Hi! My name is Laurie. I work in the healthcare industry.  I'm a fun-loving yogi with a passion for living life to the fullest. I love Colorado and enjoy spending my free time skiing, hiking and having adventures abroad. I'm all about checking out local brew pubs and having a drink or two. I want to spend a lazy Sunday reading all day or taking my puppy to the park. I love a good Italian dinner and some vino. I'm looking for someone who has a sense of humor and can keep up with me. No frat boys, Peter Pans or bar flies. Must be educated and physically fit. Thank you!


After:
MileHighSugarRush
Hi there! My friends call me 'peep' because I'm sweet and yummy. I crave fresh, pristine mountain air and regularly set my sights on new hiking adventures and conquering black moguls atop the highest snowy peaks in Colorado. Do I love a man with a hearty laugh and abs of steel? Sure thing. Jive with me if you have affection for yoga, an addiction to trying new breweries or are a certified dog whisperer. I'm up for a date at a quaint Italian bistro as long as red wine refills are available. Catch me reading a new Gillian Flynn suspense novel on a lounge-licious Sunday or spending time planning my next travel agenda--hello Malaysia, nice to meet you. Don't delay...nerds with an outdoorsy streak and a love of eggplant parm apply now.


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